Redacción Ingles

Dear Sir editor,

First, we wanted to appreciate the article from your local paper, for our company it is a pleasure to appear in your newspaper, we think your work it is very useful to show to the public our performances; the more articles you publish the more people are interesting in the theatre, and that's why I greatly appreciate your marketing.

However, I are pleased to confirm that there are different mistakes in the article, I would prefer not to tell you about it, but after reading it, I should write your newspaper.

I will divide you in four, the first one it is in the second line, we did the last year the musical "Romeo and Juliet", so we have experience in this area, the next it is about the problems, besides it is true that we had some, we could solve it quickly, apart from that, we have to point that the costumes was made by the parents, and finally our director is call "Mr. Don Robinson".

In short, we beg you pay attention to our letter and we hope you could solve the problem.

We trust we shall hear from you, and thank you very much.

Regards, the School Theatre.

Dear Sir editor,

First, we wanted to appreciate the article from your local paper, for our company it is a pleasure to appear in your newspaper, we think your work it is very useful to show to the public our performances; the more articles you publish the more people are interesting in the theatre, and that's why I greatly appreciate your marketing.

However, I are pleased to confirm that there are different mistakes in the article, I would prefer not to tell you about it, but after reading it, I should write your newspaper.

I will divide you in four, the first one it is in the second line, we did the last year the musical "Romeo and Juliet", so we have experience in this area, the next it is about the problems, besides it is true that we had some, we could solve it quickly, apart from that, we have to point that the costumes was made by the parents, and finally our director is call "Mr. Don Robinson".

In short, we beg you pay attention to our letter and we hope you could solve the problem.

We trust we shall hear from you, and thank you very much.

Regards, the School Theatre.

Dear Sir editor,

First, we wanted to appreciate the article from your local paper, for our company it is a pleasure to appear in your newspaper, we think your work it is very useful to show to the public our performances; the more articles you publish the more people are interesting in the theatre, and that's why I greatly appreciate your marketing.

However, I are pleased to confirm that there are different mistakes in the article, I would prefer not to tell you about it, but after reading it, I should write your newspaper.

I will divide you in four, the first one it is in the second line, we did the last year the musical "Romeo and Juliet", so we have experience in this area, the next it is about the problems, besides it is true that we had some, we could solve it quickly, apart from that, we have to point that the costumes was made by the parents, and finally our director is call "Mr. Don Robinson".

In short, we beg you pay attention to our letter and we hope you could solve the problem.

We trust we shall hear from you, and thank you very much.

Regards, the School Theatre.

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