Alcoholismo
Enviado por camilin98 • 26 de Marzo de 2014 • 488 Palabras (2 Páginas) • 686 Visitas
CORRECTION PARAGRAPHS ABOUT ALCOHOLISM
INTRODUCTORY:
The alcoholism more than a problem globally each day, it is a disease like any other that affects thousands of people due to uncontrolled drinking of this, consequently the people with this disease adopts withdrawal symptoms when you do not get what you want in this case would drink alcohol then this is a problem for society in which we live today because there have been several accidents for these reasons. However, this is a problem even though it has been controlled even more than in the old times but still causing serious accidents and affecting innocent people.
APPOINTMENT AUTHORITY:
'”Alcoholism'' We understand any use of alcohol-containing beverages harm to the individual, family or society (Jellinek, 1960).
This is a opinion of the ancient times, but does not change what is nowadays the definition of alcoholism, alcoholism in the actually affects the society and the family and that a person who consumes too much alcohol has no control over themselves and over their actions then this brings fatal consequences for everyone around. In fact this person should follow a few treatments to control this type of addiction that becomes disease if not treated, in fact everyone should avoid drinking alcohol for a better society.
STATISTICS:
Alcoholics discuss suicide between 6 and 15 times more than the normal population, this due to the poor control of themselves. 60% of traffic accidents are alcohol related, this happens suddenly in the mishandling of the senses necessary when handling The children of alcoholics are four times more likely to be that the children of non-alcoholics, because likewise the children are also examples of parent. One in 10 people who drink become alcoholic, but the possibility increases two or three times for teens who drink. Alcoholism is a progressive disease that can affect anyone regardless of gender, social class or education. Every alcoholic affects negatively, at least three other people.
PAST:
In the old times the problem of alcoholism was not so serious, because it was not common to go to parties or special occasions, which always takes some alcohol, for this reason in the old times they used to people not present this type of disease. Nevertheless, in ancient times showed great attraction not by alcohol due to lack of technology, not to show many shapes and flavors that make people call attention to them alcohol. In fact, all this time claimed more lives of people because alcohol causes problems in the body that cause disease organisms.
FUTURE:
In a future the alcohol will be more controlled by the police and avoid many car accidents. In fact people will have more knowledge about the consequences of this for your body and your life then will control more consumption. All in on, the people not stop drinking but were controlled to avoid possible accidents
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