Animal Cruelty

Cabanas 1

Adriana Cabanas

Mrs. Tsybizova

English 101-01

Problem – Solving Essay

25 March 2013

Postscript on the Writing Process

1. There are many elements to review in my essay such as punctuation marks, add a few sentences that were not before the final draft. What I hope the audience is aware of what I talk about in the essay and take into account the consequences of the events.

They range from basic care neglect to malicious killing. There are many ways to abuse an animal, harm or pain intentionally, either for pleasure or obtaining goods and skins, meat and scientific experiments, lack of care or attention, beatings, burnings, mutilations, poisonings, etc. Disguised as sport hunting, shows like those offered by circuses, bullfights and cockfights and dog science experiments, tears for their fur and violence against street dogs are examples of mistreatment of these defenseless beings who only show the need of man is forever wanting to feel superior to other forms of life and lack sensitivity of those who do.

2. In this essay use much of the skills mentioned in the question. I consider it a very good test because it has information about animal abuse from a good source. The most useful skill was to explain my idea about the problem and think how to solve it.

3. My most difficult problem was doing the implement of the source because it is hard to know when you cited well or if you are cheating, another problem that I always have is punctuation. But reading the book helped me a lot.

4. In this problem solving essay I learned how to cite sources that I have used in my essay, also I learned how to solve a problem with many solutions.

5. In my personal opinion the best part of the essay is the introduction because I express my thoughts through the paragraphs.

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