Basic plan Valeria Naranjo

Basic Plan

Name:  Valeria Naranjo

ID:   1007114970                                                                             Group:  15

Introduction

1. Hook:  pollution and damage so bad that causes in Medellín
2. Context (Write some background information):  The power that people have to pollute more and more in Medellín is very great, not taking conscience leads people to get sick more constantly and have a more limited life. The action of man, progress and the intention to improve living conditions are the main causes of environmental pollution that we are suffering.
3. Thesis statement:    Pollution in Medellin is becoming more noticeable in recent years, thus aggravating the environment of the city, we can see how throwing garbage and not knowing how to separate them cause serious odors in the streets, also increasing the deforestation affects the air and thus increasing CO2, this we see reflected in the air quality in recent days.

Body

1st body paragraph:

1. Topic sentence: The felling of trees is a sign of the ambition of the people.

1. Supporting details:

a.  the intention of man to improve the quality of life: to want to have better things he wants to do more harm no matter the consequences.

b.  have good quality and cheaper products: exploit natural resources important for the environment.

c.  poverty: the combustion of firewood and coal to meet needs.

1. Concluding sentence: Due to the felling of trees people can acquire more diseases, since the co2 that the trees absorb remains in the air and we are the ones that hurt us.
   

2nd body paragraph:

1. Topic sentence: throwing garbage can be because people have little sense of belonging.

1. Supporting details:

1. lack of moral responsibility: lack of actions or omissions.
2. unawareness: marginalized communities.
3. low education: nonexistence of programs that promote development in the school or social.

1. Concluding sentence: If we keep throwing so many garbage on the floor, there will come a time where we will get infections and these garbage will end our ecosystem.
   

3rd body paragraph:

1. Topic sentence: : ignorance leads us not to separate garbage well.

1. Supporting details:

1. the media: the media only transmit what is convenient for them.
2. laziness: people do not mind being well informed.
3. bad rulers: the government of this city does not do much for people to have a change.

1. Concluding sentence: throw garbage can lead us to have a shortage of water, flora and fauna.
   

Conclusion

1. Restated Thesis Statement: the contamination in Medellin is increasing and this causes that there are many bad changes in the environment.
   
2. Summary of main ideas (Restate topic sentences):

1. The felling of trees is a sign of the ambition of the people.
2. throwing garbage can be because people have little sense of belonging.
3. ignorance leads us not to separate garbage well.

1. Final thought: In recent years, Medellin has been known nationally for its innovation, but unfortunately that remains behind and contamination is so great in this city that the main news about Medellín is about pollution. If we do not become aware, we will end up with the most beautiful thing that we have, that is the environment without this we have very little chance of surviving and we are still on time to make a change in this society.

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